雅思的评分标准：
（1）task and response
不写虚的东西，事事有着落，不要假大空
乱套写作模板，材料
不要在开头和结尾花费时间
不要凑字数，要具体解释。越具体越好。
（2）cohesion and coherence
不要乱用连接词。
不要不写相关的东西。
（3）lexical resource 用词
不要乱换词，不要中式英语
（4）grammatical range and accuracy
减少语法错误。
不乱写从句。
一、题目：
In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
第一步 审题：
类型：C
第二步 开头段：
in some societies / some parts of the world /
couples /
raise children / start a family / postpone the plan to start a family / delay having a baby / put off / delay parenthood /
人们年近三十才要孩子，这个趋势对家庭和整个社会产生了深远的影响。
第三步 主体段
（1）观点一：
A: 物价飞涨
B: 年轻要攒钱
C: 晚育
- 解释（A-B）：收入不高，但生活消费高
- 解释（A-B）：要给孩子一个良好的成长环境
the cost of living is rising /
savings / deposit /
bring up children / rear children / raise a family /
low income level / save monkey /
revieve university education / well-educated
provide a secure environment for child's growth / family environment /
consider necessary to do sth /
no ... until ... /
（2）观点二：
A: 晚要小孩
B: 父母有更好的经济条件
C: 家庭更加美满
- 解释（A-B）：专注工作，事业发展，收入增加
- 解释（A-B）：生活压力小，不会因为钱吵架
become better off / live comfortably / a decent quality of life /
have a loving family / happy family / close-knit family /
on the other hand / has positive effect on / one benefit of ... /
advance career / progress career / get a pay rise /
finacial problems / matters
argue with /
（3）观点三：
A: 生孩子晚
B: 年轻人数量减少
C: 老龄化社会
- 解释（A-B）：年轻劳动力下降，生产力下降，经济会受到影响
- 解释（B-C）：年轻人照顾老人有问题，赤字增加。
population aging / young workers / lower productivity / budget deficits / arise from /
第四步 结尾
练习题：
Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reason for this problem? What are the effects on society?
审题：
类型：C
开头段：
科学发展是社会生产力的关键因素之一，然而在很多的大学里，很少的人会选择学习科学。这将会对社会造成极大的影响。
主体段：
（1）观点一：
A: 学习science比较难，无聊
B: 考不到好成绩
C: 不学science
- 解释（A-B）：比较抽象，不好学习，需要大量的理解
- 解释（A-B）：做很多重复的事情，实验等
difficult / grasp / are unwilling to / the main reason why / abstract theories / do drills / do practices / do tests / concept / do experiments / lose interesting / fail the exam / a waste of time / achieve high grades / gain a degree /
（2）观点二：
A: science 相关工作少
B: 学无所用
C: 多数学生不选
- 解释（A-B）：科学回报慢，企业不愿意大量投资。
- 解释（A-B）: 只有政府能够支持，而政府的资源有限，只会资助最好的项目。
所以很难找工作。
useless / no practical use / another reason is that / it is not easy to do sth / yeild returns immediately / private factory / since / research project / scientific project / funded / supported by the government / limited budget /
- 两个问题都要回答，同等重要
- 每个问题可以用1-2两个观点回答，如果2个观点可以分段，也可以写在一段
- 7 连接句子，是的句子变得更加紧凑。
定语从句和状语从句的相切换。
pay less attention to
place emphasis on ( 强调 )
- teachers can use computers, videos and other tools which can attract students easily, to teach a lesson.
- science students do many repetitive tests which consume their time.
- science students attend many courses which require them to do many repetitive tasks.
- i teach IELTS, which is an international exam.(需要逗号，去掉之后就变成了：我教的是一种国际化的雅思。)
- i have a boy friend, who is a lawyer.(需要逗号，否则就变成：我有一个是律师的男朋友。可能还有其他行业的。)
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