自现象级英语
Zero tolerance for mistakes.
Sentence 1
Attention: Zero tolerance for mistakes. We cannot afford to make those mistakes.
The word "today" implies a tendency.
Paraphrase: globalization is economic and cultural.
Example 1
To improve: ...that is basic today
Attention: try a foolproof approach
生命权
Human rights include the right to life.
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Example 3
To improve: not just that
Attention：临摹和背诵一样，要做到100%的和原文一样，一字不差。
People writing without imitating.
Imitation
How to avoid mistakes?
Example 4
To improve: in/ among ; some of colleges' students 歧义
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Example 5
Example 6
To improve: hard work and persistence
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Example 7
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此处sound的概念有些奇怪
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Example 9
搭配问题： sb is price-conscious 精打细算
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拓展：have abundant knowledge of sth. 很懂某事
Example 10
Correction
Attention: 1-9 数字需要拼写出来
Personal Review
In his essay "Of Studies", Francis Bacon states, "Reading makes a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an exact man."
"Writing is learned by imitation." It is not just by working out and capitalizing on the basic framework of the model, it is by paying attention to well-designed details too.
Great imitation calls for zero tolerace for mistakes. Imitation provides learners with a much-needed opportunity to sharpen their writing skills, learning through doing.
Be mindful. It takes will and skill to ensure that imitation leads to improvements in writing. The art of success is built upon persistence in the face of adversity. Extra effort will pay off in the long run.
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