My name is Black Smith, Service Manager of the CCY company.I am writing on behalf of my company to apply for the Most Improved Organisation Award. /We saw the notice of /we noticed the advertisement about ....Award and had great interest in entering for competition.
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投诉信:
Dear Sir/Mandam,
My name is Laura William,Product Manager of Snow computer sales company. I am writing to complain about the detailed issues related to the product quality and the poor after-sales service.
Our company purchased one hundred new-type tablet computers produced in the new product line of your company last week, but we found that the product did not fullfill/meet our requirements and the after-sales servies was poor.
To begin with, the computer screen can't meet our requirements since there is no difference between the latest model tablet computers and the old ones,thus we think this is unfair deal for our extra expense.In addition,the computer system is not upgraded as you promised, which makes us SNOW encounter a large number of complanits from our customers. As a result ,our corporate reputation has been stained to a certain extent.-
On the other hand, we are not satisfied with after-sales service.When we got in touch with your after-sales service department and inform them the situation the day before yesterday,they showed a perfunctory /pəˈfʌŋktəri/ 敷衍的 attitude towards our staff, and we have not received any reply yet.-2
Our SNOW has cooperated with your company many years,we have maintained an excellent partership with each other, we have to admit that your offerings and services in the past were very high.-3
We hope we can investigate and find the essential issues in the quality and the service of this batch/bætʃ/ 一批 of the computers as soon as possible and inform our Purchasing Department in written form.What is more, you should withdraw 提,取 the goods with quality problems.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Laura William.
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