题目要求（该题为论述题，题目已经给了观点让我们论述）

Gifts: A Way of Expressing Love

  (1) 礼物是表达爱意的方式；

  (2) 论述礼物的重要作用；

  (3) 你的看法

范文

Recently, it is commonly accepted that giving gifts is a great way of showing love and care towards the beloved. The truth is deep and profound. No matter how big or small the gift. is, it is deeply associated with love and good memories. Gifts may help us forget our troubles and take us back to the happy moments. Therefore, giving gifts is rewarding.

Many remarkable factors contribute to this argument. First of all, giving gifts is the best way to celebrate certain occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries of marriage and so on. Whenever looking at those gifts, we can recall the exact moment when we received it and our hearts will be refilled with sweet memories. Second, gifts are closely related with the person who gave them to us. We can feel their love and care through the gifts they gave us. I still remember the gift my grandfather gave me on my birthday, which was a lovely doll. Every time I see it, I could still feel the deep love from my grandfather and it gives me the encouragement to face up with all kinds of difficulties. In addition, gifts may make our life more colorful. No matter giving or receiving gifts we may feel happy and everyday seems to be sunny.

All mentioned above tell us that giving gifts is a good way of expressing love and a sense of happiness. Gifts may attach our emotions to people we love and the sweet memories we spent together. Therefore, gifts are always things to be cherished.

开头

Recently, it is commonly accepted that giving gifts is a great way of showing love and care towards the beloved. 

我们将其改写：recently,it is believed that giving..................

这不也是一样 的了吗？只不过这个不是两个观点让你选，而是一个观点让你论述、

不像关于学历和知识的辩论With the development of the society, more and more people enroll in the postgraduate examination for getting a higher diploma. 。有一个前提环境，那么这里我们也能用这个前提环境吗

答案是可以的

With the development of society, giving gifts has become an increasingly popular way of showing love and care towards others.

然后

The truth is deep and profound. 

在对的观点用it is 句型重复完了之后我们就加上自己的观点，往往是赞成或反对，i agree it 或that is right，在青少年缺乏拼搏精神中我们也能看到As I see it, this phenomenon is truly footed in fact. ，as i see it ,in my opinion .在首段就可以

后来

说实话，英语作文不仅仅是学会写英语单词，还真得有个行文思路

题目中讲了表达爱意，这个时候我们应该遵循其思路，礼物，礼轻情意重，看来我们还是要学点语文了

礼物不分大小。no matter how big or small.

礼物代表的美好记忆 it is deeply associated with love and good memories.，

最后therefor giving gifts is rewarding.表明我们赞成的立场

No matter how big or small the gift. is, it is deeply associated with love and good memories. Gifts may help us forget our troubles and take us back to the happy moments. Therefore, giving gifts is rewarding.

中间

接下来我们要写什么呢，在下笔之前我真该改了脚踩西瓜皮乱滑，送礼物的重要性，怎么体现其重要性，就是其优点

Many remarkable factors contribute to this argument.

承接一下

然后 First of all  Second  In addition,发现没，在结构性的文章中都有，至于中间的具体内容我们也想不到，只能中间乱编一下，不过这里有个好的点，可以用自己的例子来论证

. Second, gifts are closely related with the person who gave them to us. We can feel their love and care through the gifts they gave us.

I still remember the gift my grandfather gave me on my birthday, which was a lovely doll. Every time I see it, I could still feel the deep love from my grandfather and it gives me the encouragement to face up with all kinds of difficulties.

她说她爷爷给了他一个洋娃娃就有了面对困难的勇气，这不就是乱扯卵蛋吗？那么我可以写我爷爷给了我一只钢笔让我好好学习给了我度过困难的勇气

最后

All mentioned above tell us that giving gifts is a good way of expressing love and a sense of happiness. Gifts may attach our emotions to people we love and the sweet memories we spent together. Therefore, gifts are always things to be cherished.

这个句式值得学习

All mentioned above tell us that giving gifts is a good way of expressing love and a sense of happiness.

我们可以在许多观点论证文章中应用，比如前面的青年学生拼搏不够，最后加一段

All mentioned above tell us that The younger generation indeed lacks a fighting spirit. However, this is not just an issue with the younger generation, but also influenced by various factors.

学到了什么

1.文章体裁，不再是两个观点，而是重点一个
2 转换思想，重要性转变为优点，和可以编造例子

3下笔之前应该好好想怎么写

4 句式

Recently, it is commonly accepted that giving gifts is a great way of showing love and care towards the beloved. 

All mentioned above tell us that giving gifts is a good way of expressing love and a sense of happiness