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对于英语考试写作题，大家给出的普遍建议，无外乎学习一些常用体裁的通用结构，记一些放之四海而皆准的标准句式，还有高频可用的短语词组。
这些建议当然都是受用的，不过我的痛点在于词汇量有限，如果考试的主题是我不熟悉的领域，那么，连主题词和关键词我都写不出来，那么，就算我可以很快速地用常见句式搭建一个作文框架，但那也只是骨架而已，实实在在的内容还是有赖于词汇量和敏捷的思维才能写出来。
无奈之下，我开始思索，最近有些什么热门话题，可能成为考试的主题呢？随着Deepseek流行起来，AI再度成为炙手可热的话题，于是我试着写了一篇相关的练习文。然后请豆包帮忙修改一下。权当是押题训练吧。
我的原文如下——
How to Use AI Smartly
With the rapid development of technology, the rise of AI has profoundly reshaped our lives in many different ways.
First of all,AI-powed platforms provide us a variety of opportunities to get up-date informations. Secondly，AI provides personalized study contents for students by analysis，which help them to study efficiently.What' more, virtual assistants and chatrob are able to give instant feedbank to students' performance. In addition, as a smart tool, AI can automate lots of simple yet repetitive tasks, so our workload will be unburdened，and we can concentrate on the creative works.
Although AI has brought great advantages ，it is by no means without any limitations，as listed below.
Above all，what we should realize is that the informations generated by AI are not completely accurate，thus we are supposed to take a rational attitude to what AI provides. Additionally, as a tool, AI lacks hunman consciousness and emotion，and it can never replace human essence. If we rely totally on AI，our abilities of solving problems and mind of creativity will probably be reduced.
To summarize, AI plays an important role in today’s digital age，however，there can be problems involved as well. It is sensible for us to make full use of the positive sides，and try our best to minimize the negative effcts.
豆包都出的批改如下——
“AI-powed platforms provide us a variety of opportunities to get up-date informations.” 中，“AI-powed” 拼写错误，应为 “AI-powered”；“up-date” 应分开写为 “up to date”；“informations” 是不可数名词，不能加 “s”，应改为 “information”。
“AI provides personalized study contents for students by analysis，which help them to study efficiently.” 中，“help” 应与先行词 “contents” 保持主谓一致，用复数形式 “helps”。
“virtual assistants and chatrob are able to give instant feedbank to students' performance.” 中，“chatrob” 拼写错误，应为 “chatbot”；“feedbank” 拼写错误，应为 “feedback”。
“our workload will be unburdened” 表达不太地道，可改为 “our workload will be reduced” 。
“the informations generated by AI are not completely accurate” 中 “informations” 错误，应是 “information”。
“as a tool, AI lacks hunman consciousness and emotion” 中 “hunman” 拼写错误，应为 “human”。
修改后的文章
How to Use AI Smartly
With the rapid development of technology, the rise of AI has profoundly reshaped our lives in many different ways.
First of all, AI-powered platforms provide us with a variety of opportunities to get up-to-date information. Secondly，AI provides personalized study content for students through analysis，which helps them to study efficiently. What's more, virtual assistants and chatbots are able to give instant feedback on students' performance. In addition, as a smart tool, AI can automate lots of simple yet repetitive tasks, so our workload will be reduced，and we can concentrate on creative work.
Although AI has brought great advantages ，it is by no means without any limitations，as listed below.
Above all，what we should realize is that the information generated by AI is not completely accurate，so we are supposed to take a rational attitude towards what AI provides. Additionally, as a tool, AI lacks human consciousness and emotion，and it can never replace human beings. If we rely totally on AI，our problem-solving abilities and creativity may be reduced.
To summarize, AI plays an important role in today’s digital age，however，there can be problems involved as well. It is sensible for us to make full use of its positive aspects and try our best to minimize the negative effects.
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